The charts give information about world forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts give information about world forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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pie chart illustrates data about world woods in five various places namely,south
America
,
Africa
,Asia,Europe and
north
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North
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America
.
I
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It
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it
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is
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clear
,The
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that the
proportion of world forests in
Africa
was the biggest among other areas
while
the figure
of
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for
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timber
was the smallest.
Moreover
, North
America
was the
most
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region
had
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timber
. To
beign
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begin
with, the forests in
Africa
,
accounting
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for approximately 27%.The second biggest cycle was
North
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America
by 25 per
cent
. There was around 16% of wood in South
America
. Europe had almost 18 per
cent
of
forest
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the forest
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.
Lastly
, there was only nearly 14%.
On the other hand
, The number of
timber
in North
America
was the highest, accounting for 30 per
cent
of the total.After that, there was 23% of
timber
in South
America
. The number of
timber
in Europe increased slightly to 20%.
Then
Asia had just 18 per
cent
among other categories.
Africa
has the lowest percentage of
timber
by
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9 per
cent
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words america, africa, timber, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • afforestation
  • biodiversity
  • conservation
  • sustainable
  • ecosystem
  • carbon sequestration
  • land use
  • temperate
  • tropical
  • subtropical
  • arid
  • degradation
  • reforestation
  • habitat
  • old-growth
  • primary forest
  • secondary forest
  • logging
  • environmental policy
  • climate mitigation
  • carbon footprint
  • flora and fauna
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