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The charts give information about world forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts give information about world forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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pie chart illustrates data about world woods in five various places namely,south
America
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,
Africa
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,Asia,Europe and
north
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North
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America
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.
I
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it
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is
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 clear
,The
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that the
 proportion of world forests in
Africa
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 was the biggest among other areas
while
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 the figure
of
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for
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timber
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 was the smallest.
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, North
America
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 was the
most
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region
had
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that had
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timber
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. To
beign
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begin
 with, the forests in
Africa
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,
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 for approximately 27%.The second biggest cycle was
North
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in North
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America
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 by 25 per
cent
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. There was around 16% of wood in South
America
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. Europe had almost 18 per
cent
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 of
forest
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the forest
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.
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, there was only nearly 14%.
On the other hand
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, The number of
timber
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 in North
America
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 was the highest, accounting for 30 per
cent
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 of the total.After that, there was 23% of
timber
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 in South
America
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. The number of
timber
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 in Europe increased slightly to 20%.
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 Asia had just 18 per
cent
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 among other categories.
Africa
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 has the lowest percentage of
timber
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by
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 9 per
cent
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, africa, timber, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • afforestation
  • biodiversity
  • conservation
  • sustainable
  • ecosystem
  • carbon sequestration
  • land use
  • temperate
  • tropical
  • subtropical
  • arid
  • degradation
  • reforestation
  • habitat
  • old-growth
  • primary forest
  • secondary forest
  • logging
  • environmental policy
  • climate mitigation
  • carbon footprint
  • flora and fauna
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