The line graph shows the number oF serious crimes that occured in London between 2003 and 2012.
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oF
serious crimes that Correct your spelling
of
occured
in Correct your spelling
occurred
London
between 2003 and 2012.
The given line chart illustrates the Use synonyms
number
of heinous crimes (armed robbery, assault, and murder), which were occurred in Use synonyms
London
from 2003 to 2012.
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robberies
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decline
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assaults
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some
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In 2004, there were 3700 armed Use synonyms
robberies
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occurred
London
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Then
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crime showed a dramatic Linking Words
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and in 2008, around 1100 Use synonyms
robberies
occurred in Use synonyms
London
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, from the year of 2009 to 2012, the Linking Words
number
of armed Use synonyms
robberies
remained almost stable at 1500. Use synonyms
In contrast
, in 2003, around 2300 Linking Words
assaults
happened in Use synonyms
London
, and it showed a slight Use synonyms
decline
in 2006, which was 2000. Use synonyms
Then
, the Linking Words
number
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assaults
again showed an Use synonyms
increase
of 2200 in 2007 followed by a Use synonyms
decline
of 2000 in 2008. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
assaults
started to rise after 2008 and reached 2700 in 2012.
In terms of murder, in 2003, there were 500 murders were occurred, and in 2005, it increased slightly and reached 900 followed by a Use synonyms
decline
of 600 in 2006 . In 2010, after a Use synonyms
decline
of 500, murder experienced another Use synonyms
increase
of 700.Use synonyms
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