The graph below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005, compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005, compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who are unemployed in five European countries in 2005. At first sight, we can divide the countries into two groups: the first group contains Poland, Italy and Hungary, with a significant amount of younger who are without jobs,
while
the second group involves Germany and Denmark, which have the lowest percentages of unemployed individuals.
Firstly
, the comparison in the first band. Poland has a peak of younger without a job with 33%, followed by Italy with 28% and Hungary with 22%.
Additionally
, Poland has the highest percentage of
overall
unemployment with 29%.
Secondly
, more details of the second band. Germany shows the largest percentage of unemployment among people aged between 15 and 24 at 23%, followed by Denmark with 12%.
Additionally
, Germany has the major count of citizens without work.
to sum up
, the graph shows different portions of individuals with unemployment in five different countries of Europa
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • unemployment rate
  • youth unemployment
  • overall unemployment
  • comparison
  • percentage
  • aged between
  • economic conditions
  • educational system
  • vocational training
  • long-term impacts
  • policy changes
  • job training programs
  • disparity
  • national unemployment rates
  • European countries
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