A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. She is planning to stay with you, but you can't accomodate her. Write a letter to her - tell her the reasons - Apologise - Make alternative arrangements

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Dear Sara, Hope you're doing well. I am

glade

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glad

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here

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hear

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that you are coming to my home town

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next week. I think

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the

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right time to visit here because nowadays the

wheather

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weather

conditions are

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normal and not too much difference

form

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from

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the UK. So you could find a fantastic

atmosphare

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atmosphere

here to spend your time.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

, As you

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in your

last

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letter

that

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you like to stay with me.

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will be

pleasure

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for me and I feel proud about your thinking that my home is

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the

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safest place for you. But let me

explanin

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explain

, that I could not arrange the

accomodatiom

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accommodation

accommodations

at my house because it is not a

suitble

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suitable

place for you

due to

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its distance from the city and it is

also

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avery

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very

small house situated in a slum area so I would not recommend you to stay here.

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, I will arrange a guest house room for you near

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the country

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country side

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countryside

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, so that you

could

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easily access famous sightseeing points and enjoy your trip.

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, I would like to say that you have to be

carefull

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careful

from

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strangers during your stay

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the crime ratio is zero

percentin

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the city

but

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you should be

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aware

of any unusual situation. I hope it will be a memorable and fantastic visit of your life and you

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enjoy it even in your dreams. Your Faithfully, Kunwar.

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Single idea per paragraph

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point to improve clarity.

Logical structure

Improve logical flow by organizing ideas more coherently from the introduction to conclusion.

Greeting and closing

You have a clear greeting and closing in your letter, which helps frame your communication effectively.

Complete response

You've addressed all parts of the task, including the explanation and the alternative arrangements.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

235 words

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The Closing

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