The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates the amount of cell
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phone
in millions which were purchased in a period of 6 years Fix the agreement mistake
phones
according to
different brands. As an Linking Words
overall
trend, Nokia and Samsung sold the most handphones Linking Words
while
Apple mobile Linking Words
phone
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sales
gradually rose.
As shown in the illustration, Nokia was the best-selling Use synonyms
handphone’s
brand and the Change noun form
handphone
sales
increased from 2006 to 2011 before a fall in 2012 to 335 Use synonyms
million
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unit
. Meanwhile, Samsung mobile Change to a plural noun
units
phone
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sales
improved substantially from 117 Use synonyms
million
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units
in 2011 to about 397 Use synonyms
million
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units
in 2012. Apple cell Use synonyms
phone
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sales
showed an upward trend from 2.3 Use synonyms
million
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units
in 2007 Use synonyms
surged
to around 136 Verb problem
apply
million
in 2012.
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Next,
Ericsson Linking Words
sales
fell considerably from 74 Use synonyms
million
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units
in 2006 to 28 Use synonyms
million
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units
in 2011. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the total of Motorola phones sold gradually dropped from 210 Linking Words
million
in 2006 to 28 Use synonyms
million
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units
in 2012.
In conclusion, over the span of six years, few brands maintained their Use synonyms
sales
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while
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others
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others'
other's
sales
fell, and a new brand made a rise in the market.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phone, sales, million, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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