The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
process
of recycling plastic
bottles. The primary aim of this
process
is to convert plastic
waste into commercial products, such
as containers.
The process
begins with the collection of plastic
waste from the general public, which is then
transported by trucks to a recycling facility. Once at the facility, the plastic
is sorted into different categories. After sorting, the plastic
is compressed into blocks, which are then
fed into a crusher. The crushing process
breaks the blocks down into small pieces, which are thoroughly washed to remove impurities.
Next,
the washed plastic
pieces are melted and transformed into small pellets. These pellets are heated to create raw material. Finally
, the raw material is used to manufacture various everyday products, such
as containers and other plastic
items.Submitted by Narayan Khajuria on
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