The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing of ready-to-eat noodles.
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involves eight steps to manufacture spaghetti which Linking Words
begin
with flour added with other materials to make noodle Correct subject-verb agreement
begins
discs
. After frying and adding spices, the noodles are packed and sealed as cup shells.
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Firstly
, a food truck is attached to storage silos to obtain a large quantity of flour. In the next step, flour is added to the mixer Linking Words
along with
water and oil. Linking Words
Further
, the mixer converted these ingredients into dough which gets transferred to conveying belts to roll out into large sheets of dough.
Eventually, the dough sheets are cut out as strips to give them the shape of Linking Words
discs
. In the fifth step, these Use synonyms
discs
are fried in cooking oil followed by the process of drying. After that, noodle Use synonyms
discs
in cups are ready with a mixture of vegetables and spices. At Use synonyms
last
, labels are used for labelling the cups. Linking Words
Finally
, noodle cups are sealed for marketing.Linking Words
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