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produces
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in the first step a variety amount of coal, which is mined successfully, Linking Words
transfers
to the gasifier by truck, and Wrong verb form
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then
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is produce
produce
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Gaz is produced and after cooling in the factory, some waste is divided.
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Conversely
, in the factory gases, which are separated from waste gases produce power plants. Linking Words
Finally
, excessive amounts of electricity produce dramatically. Linking Words
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, these amounts of production are used for both factories and residential areas.Linking Words
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