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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with perdictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with perdictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The line graphs illustrate changes in the proportion of four selected demographic trends in Asian countries over a period of 30 years from 1970 to 2020, including forecasts for 2030 and 2040. All four countries demonstrate a
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 in the rate Looking at the
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that there is a noticeable fluctuation in Starting with
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Malaysia
, whose figure stood at just over 30% in 1970, witnessed a considerable increase during the given time period. In
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, the proportion of
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 population slightly exceeded 30% in 1980, but by 1990, it had risen significantly, approaching nearly 50%. Both
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Thailand
 and Indonesia experienced a moderate rise in their urban population proportions from 1970 to 1990. By 2000, it had reached almost 30%.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • population percentage
  • rural-urban migration
  • industrial growth
  • economic development
  • government policies
  • urban infrastructure
  • predictions for 2030 and 2040
  • economic or policy focus
  • infrastructure challenges
  • housing and social services
  • socio-economic framework
  • overcrowding
  • pollution
  • cultural dynamics
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