The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph illustrates changes in populations in 4 countries of Asia from 1970 until 2020,

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forecasted for 2030 and 2040. In general, it is expected to get grow after 16 years from now. The rise of

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quickly changed in 50 years,

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predicted to increase in future. Specifically, in 1970 they consisted of 30 % of total citizens in the world, but started to rocket from

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until 2020,

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, it's anticipated to have stable growth for the next two decades.

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actively increased its number of people, the Philippines, which started nearly with

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, has fluctuated since 2000 right after

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at 50% in 1990. It reports It’s nearby with Thailand that soared since the start of the graph.

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, Indonesia started to chase second place right after

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despite having the lowest percentage in 1970, It had followed consistent growth until

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,

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had the most human count out of 4 countries of all time, opposing

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as it changed constantly. Indonesia started to rocket, but was still under

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Thailand had slight growth.The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.