The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates key data about the amount of
visitors
to Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017.
The units are measured in millions.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that in 2017 the number
of tourists was the highest throughout the period. In addition
, The number
of visitors
staying on the island is constant for most of the years. Whereas
, the number
of visitors
staying on cruise ships increased over the period.
According to
what is shown, In the beginning, the number
of tourists was 0.75 million then
between 2010 and 2013 doubled. After that, it kept his number
until the end. Except in 2016, it dropped slightly.
In terms of the amount of second type of visitors
, it started at a quarter million and fluctuated in the first three years at the same amount. Finally
, it rose sharply from 0.25 until it reached 2 million.Submitted by gral33jmi on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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