The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graphs
illustrates
the total percentage of films Change the verb form
illustrate
releases
and the total of ticket Wrong verb form
released
sales
in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Overall
, the most type genre
Change preposition
of genre
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
released
is Add a missing verb
is released
drama
, however
the Add a comma
however,
popular
Correct quantifier usage
most popular
movies
in Fix the agreement mistake
movie
a
country is Correct article usage
the
a
Correct article usage
apply
comedy
.
In terms Fix the agreement mistake
comedies
on
films released, it shows a significant Change preposition
of
increased
in most of the genres except romance. The Replace the word
increase
drama
movies
became the highest with over 25% in 1996 and increased to 35% in 2006. This
trend also
applied to comedy
and fantasy
with comedy
from 20% to 25% and fantasy
with around 12% to over 15% in 2006. The romance
Correct article usage
Romance
movies
on the other hands
, Fix the agreement mistake
hand
shows
a stable percentage over the years with only around 6%.
Despite the Correct subject-verb agreement
show
drama
movies
being the highest film released, the most popular movies
in Fix the agreement mistake
movie
a
country is Correct article usage
the
comedy
with 20% ticket sales
in 1996 and rose to around 23% in 2006. Similarly
, the ticket sales
in drama
and fantasy
movies
also
rose with drama
approximately
15% to 16% and Change preposition
from approximately
fantasy
from around 3% to 4% in 2006. In contrast
, the sales
of romance movies
decrease
from 5% in 1996 to less than 3% in 2006.Wrong verb form
decreased
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, drama, movies, comedy, fantasy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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