You work for an international company. You want to attend special family celebration during working hours. You need to take time off work for this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Give details of family celebration. Tell your manager how much time time off work you need. Suggest how work can be done while you attend the celebration.
Dear Mr. Blue,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I have a marriage function of
my cousin's brother on Tuesday 10th January. Change preposition
for
Furthermore
, we are not only cousins but also
we have been good friends since childhood. Moreover
, after the wedding, they arrange a dance competition and a small party only for family members.
In addition
, the venue of the marriage is very far from my home, about 150 kilometres, as I mentioned, I have three functions to attend. Therefore
, I need 3 days off from 10th January till 13th January.
Additionally
, I can handle the work while
travelling and the rest of the tasks, one of my colleagues Rahul will do and I will recheck his job online through the Google Meeting application. Also
, two meetings are pending with Mr. Red, so I will do it at night.
I'd be grateful if you give me some days off.
Thanks in advance,
Yours sincerely,
Red.Submitted by satnamkalsi06 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider providing a clearer structure by separating each main idea into its own paragraph. This can help the reader follow your request more easily.
Task Achievement
Be more concise in your request to ensure clarity. Overly detailed descriptions can make it harder to focus on the main point of the letter.
Task Achievement
The letter maintains a polite and professional tone throughout, which is appropriate for a request to a manager.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter opens and closes with suitable greetings, making it respectful and courteous.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite