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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart provides key information about the survey questionnaire regarding the rated Parkway Hotel
customer
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service
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. The questionnaire involved 100
guests
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 and divided it between the years 2005 and 2010. The units are measured in percentage.
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, it is clear from the charts that there was a significant dramatic increase in 2010, the guest rating for
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service
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 was excellent, about 28%,
whereas
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 the rating in 2005 sharply decreased to 5%.
In addition
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, in 2005 the
guests
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 were satisfied and rated the
customer
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service
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 at 45%, and
then
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 it can be observed that in 2010 they dropped off to 17%.
According to
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 what is shown in comparisons, the very poor
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service
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 rated by
guests
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 has been reduced during the period, it was in 2005 about 15%, and in 2010 it decreased slightly to 4%. In 2005 the
guests
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 rated the
customer
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service
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 as good, as the
service
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 was 14%, and
then
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 it rose by 25%. In terms of poor rating, it is notable that there were about 21% in 2005, and
then
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 in 2010 it decreased to 12%.
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Overall
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overall
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, there are several differences based on
guests
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' ratings of
customer
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service
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 during the given period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words customer, service, guests with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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