More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or “remotely” rather than going into an office each day. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?
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work
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from
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from-home
home
culture, especially after Use synonyms
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the pandemic
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. In my viewpoint, Linking Words
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the pros
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outweigh the cons. Use synonyms
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negative assert that employees working from Use synonyms
home
may experience a lack of motivation and concentration in Use synonyms
office
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work
. In fact, in professional Use synonyms
workplaces
everyone around is busy Add a comma
workplaces,
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with
this
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home
. One has to do Use synonyms
work
with their family members around. Use synonyms
Therefore
, at times it is difficult to motivate Linking Words
one-self
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oneself
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on
work
.
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On the other hand
, those who consider Linking Words
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employee's
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employees
time
. Indeed, before Use synonyms
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work
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is
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time
, which one can utilise in finishing his Use synonyms
office
tasks.
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Furthermore
, it increases Linking Words
employee's
productivity. As a matter of fact, people feel relieved either when they are around their loved ones or they are in their comfort zoneChange noun form
employee
,
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work
and could prove more productive professionally. Use synonyms
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work
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can help professionals to deliver the best of their abilities.
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To sum up
, undoubtedly workers may sometimes feel demotivated and unable to concentrate, but Linking Words
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Coherence & Cohesion
Try to maintain consistency in tenses to improve clarity. For example, 'a few companies is' should be 'a few companies are.'
Task Achievement
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General Language Use
Work on diversifying your vocabulary and sentence structures to achieve greater variety and prevent repetition of ideas.
Task Achievement
You have effectively identified and presented both advantages and disadvantages of working from home, providing a balanced discussion.
Coherence & Cohesion
Your essay begins with a clear introduction and concludes with a summary of your main points, which helps summarize your stance effectively.
Coherence & Cohesion
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
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