You are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between your properties is old and In poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of building a new fence. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter say what the problems are explain how a new fence will solve the problems suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Mr.Kumar, I would like to bring your attention that your dogs
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are damaging the
fence
in the backyard. As you know my
fence
is in poor condition and the dogs are jumping on the
fence
when they try to play with the plant on your side of the backyard
due to
that
fence
getting damaged day by day. I am looking to replace the old
fence
across my backyard which would resolve the property getting damaged by dogs as the new fencing I am planning is improved with pet-friendly materials which will not get damaged by the animals. The total cost
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the
fence
for all 3 sides is $4500 per side $1500 and the other two sides' neighbours are accepted to share the cost by $750 respective of their side,
similarly
, I would request you to bear the cost of your share of $750. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks Vetriselvan
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Try organizing the content into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific point.
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Include a polite question or suggestion at the end to facilitate further discussion.
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The letter effectively identifies the problem and suggests a reasonable solution.
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The tone of the letter is polite and neighborly, which suits the purpose of the letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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