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The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the general percentage of different matrimonial statuses (separated, married, never married, widowed, divorced and same-sex marriage on the first chart) of Canadian and Australian citizens.
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, there is a higher portion of married people in Australia, compared to
Canada
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Canadians have a greater share of separated couples as opposed to the Australian. When it comes to the percentage of residents in
Canada
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 who never married, it is the same as those who are widowed (both 7%),
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 in Australia it is 5% for singles and 6% for widowers. In terms of divorcees, only a mere 1% of
Canada
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's population had a spouse who died. In comparison the percentage of widowed, Australia's citizens is greater and comes up to 2%. One additional category is shown on the pie chart regarding the data gathered in
Canada
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, which is same-sex marriage. Only 3% of Canadian couples of the same gender are wed.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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