Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In recent years, a growing number of elderly individuals are being placed in
care
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homes
rather than being cared for by their families. Use synonyms
While
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this
trend may seem like a disadvantage, it can Linking Words
also
have advantages. Linking Words
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essay will discuss both sides and provide examples to support the analysis.
One significant advantage of nursing Linking Words
homes
is the professional Use synonyms
care
they provide. Another benefit is the opportunities for social interaction available in Use synonyms
such
institutions. Many Linking Words
care
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homes
organize group activities and events that foster a sense of community among residents. Use synonyms
This
can combat loneliness and improve the mental Linking Words
well being
of elderly individuals, who might Add a hyphen
well-being
otherwise
feel isolated at home. Linking Words
Especially
trained staff are available to attend to the elderly's medical and mental needs, ensuring they receive specialized support that family members might not be able to offer. Replace the word
Specially
For example
, if I developed dementia in my old age, I would go to a nursing home because there is constant monitoring and individual treatment plans, and nursing Linking Words
homes
are better equipped.
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On the other hand
, one major disadvantage is the emotional strain it can place on elderly people. Being separated from their families can lead to feelings of depression, particularly if visits from loved ones are infrequent. Linking Words
But
these facilities are often expensive, making them unaffordable for some families or draining older Correct word choice
However
people
savings. Change noun form
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This
can sometimes lead to poor quality Linking Words
care
, leading to uncomfortable living conditions. Use synonyms
For example
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according to
statistics from the Linking Words
portuguese
magazine "Old and Life", 80 Change the capitalization
Portuguese
percent
of the elderly are not satisfied with the conditions in the nursing home.
In conclusion, Change the spelling
per cent
although
nursing Linking Words
homes
provide professional Use synonyms
care
and social opportunities. But they Use synonyms
also
raise concerns about emotional Linking Words
well being
and mental health.Add a hyphen
well-being
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