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The chart below shows the most popular sports in French University in thre different years. Summarize and make comparison when necessary.

The chart below shows the most popular sports in French University in thre different years. Summarize and make comparison when necessary.
The given three pie charts illustrate the most popular
sports
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 namely
tennis
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, swimming,
basketball
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, football, and other types of
sports
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 in French Secondary Schools in three different
years
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.
Overall
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, the
popularity
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 of swimming experienced an increase and
then
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 decreased,
while
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 the
popularity
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 of other types of
sports
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 declined in three
years
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.
Tennis
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 was the least
faviourite
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favourite
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sports
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sport
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 in French Secondary Schools. In 1990, 39% of
students
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 preferred swimming,
while
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 in 2000,
the
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it experienced an increase and 48 % of
students
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 preferred swimming.
However
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, after ten
years
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 in 2010, the
popularity
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 of swimming decreased and 41% of
students
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 liked swimming.
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, in 1990, 25% of
students
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 preferred other
sports
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. In 2000, the
popularity
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 of other
sports
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 experienced a slight decrease and 23% of
students
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 preferred other
sports
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 and in 2010, only 8% of
students
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 liked other types of
sports
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. In 1990, 16%
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students
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 loved
basketball
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 and football.
Moreover
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, in 2000, only 7% of
students
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 liked
basketball
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,
however
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, the
popularity
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 of
basketball
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 increased in 2010, and 25% of
students
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 liked
basketball
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. Only 4 % of
students
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 liked
tennis
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 in the
years
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 1990 and 2000, and in 2010, the
popularity
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 of
tennis
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 slightly increased and 7% of
students
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 liked
tennis
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, moreover, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, tennis, basketball, years, popularity, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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