The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social center in melbourne, australia for the period 2000 to 2020 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The graph reveals information about the
number
of Use synonyms
people
who participate in different Use synonyms
activities
depending on the social Use synonyms
center
, located in Melbourne Australia, in the period between 2000 and 2020
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centre
Overall
, the graph includes several Linking Words
activities
, Use synonyms
such
as the film club. The line of Linking Words
this
activity has been stable from 2000 to 2020, but all other Linking Words
activities
have seen a fluting line from 2000 to 2020.
The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
who participated in the film club was highest in 2000, and there was no significant change in 2020, which is still the highest point of the graph. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
who joined marital art Use synonyms
swing
from 2000 to 2020.
In 2010 there was a significant shift in the Wrong verb form
swung
number
of Use synonyms
people
who participated in both table tennis and amateur dramatics Use synonyms
activities
, the line of table tennis jumped and started to increase in 2010, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, amateur dramatics in 2010 started to drop and begin to vanish in 2020.Linking Words
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