The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. summarize the information by selecting main features.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. summarize the information by selecting main features.
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The diagram illustrates changes that occurred in the public
library
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layout 20 years ago. Generally, the present central
library
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looks more organized and creates electronic resources. In the past, most of the resources are targeting adults more than children. Currently, a computer
room
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has been added
instead
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of a reading
room
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.
Additionally
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, there is a new area for an enquiry desk replaced by a café, which offers some relaxation for visitors. Tables and chairs in the centre of the
library
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were removed, which gives more space in front of the
library
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entrance. The in past side, the region allocated for adult non-fiction
books
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was substituted by adult fiction
books
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, an information desk, and self-service machines. On the opposite side,
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of adult fiction
books
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, there are all reference
books
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. The new plan shows the transformation of children's
books
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in the lecture
room
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.
Moreover
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, CDs, videos, and computer games
room
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become
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apply
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for children's fiction
books
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, and for
organization
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the organization
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, books with synonyms.
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