Task 1: The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram chart below illustrates the changes that took place in three different branches of
crime
in Newport city centre from 2003–2012.
Overall
,
the provided graph shows the fluctuation of three areas of crime
during 2003–2012, where burglary
and car theft
have higher rates than theft
from the person.
Firstly
, burglary
showed the highest rate
at the beginning of 2003, and its peak was in 2004 when the number of burglaries was around 3,400. However
, after 2004 it showed a declining tendency, and in 2008 it reached its lowest point with 1,100 crime
rates. Furthermore
, in 2009 burglary
proportion was slightly high, and during 2009–2012 its fluctuation was around 1,500.
Secondly
, robbery had the lowest amount of numbers in Newport City, and its rate
variation was between 500 to 700 every year. On the other hand
, car theft
had significantly high crime
rates. Particularly in 2003, it had 2,800 incidents, and from 2003 to 2006, it showed a slight decline in its dominance. Moreover
, from 2007 to 2012, it showed substantial growth, and at the end
of 2012, its crime
rate
was around 3,000 incidents.
Taking everything into consideration, between 2003–2012 in Newport Center, robbery had the lowest crime
rate
, while
burglary
and car theft
had gradually fluctuating tendenc
Correct your spelling
tendency
tendencies
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