The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities is by reducing the need for people to travel from home to work , shopping and education.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge
Many
civillians
say that reducing Correct your spelling
civilians
traffic
can only be done by limiting the usage of Use synonyms
transports
. I believe that making and redesigning new Fix the agreement mistake
transport
roads
can limit it from happening . Use synonyms
For example
, Japan has one of the best Linking Words
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roads system
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road systems
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to other nations, Wrong verb form
compared
in addition
to that Linking Words
traffics are
hardly seen or heard Correct subject-verb agreement
traffic is
eithder
by news or social media.A lot of people believe that having a timetable Correct your spelling
either
on
hours Change preposition
for
where
others go Correct word choice
when
for
their jobs, shopping and education might be a solution to stop Change preposition
to
traffic
.Use synonyms
This
is a controversial idea because we can't control societies by making their needs hard to reach because Linking Words
its
absurd to actually believe that. Replace the word
it's
it is
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, Linking Words
traffic
these days Use synonyms
are
out of hand and sadly there is no ideal way to stop it , everyone Correct subject-verb agreement
is
are
suggesting but none is actually ready for Change the verb form
is
this
change. Linking Words
For instance
, Kuwait Linking Words
have
started being more strict on how many cars you can own , usage of phone Change the verb form
has
while
driving , Linking Words
crossing
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and crossing
roads
and Use synonyms
moreover
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this
change Linking Words
have
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has
got
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made
few
crowds furious. Laws aren't designed to please everyone , it's made to prevent harm from happening and Correct article usage
a few
reducing
it .Some believe that the reason behind Wrong verb form
reduce
this
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traffic
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dilema
is that many Correct your spelling
dilemma
dont
respect the law or the need for it , they just want the other drivers to understand Correct your spelling
don't
in addition
,to that it was made clear through social media by drivers they were protesting about the new laws. Linking Words
Secondly
, I believe having a gap between what time you can arrive and leave is wonderful. Linking Words
For example
, those who live far can promise to arrive earlier than others between 20-30 minutes and can leave before their colleague and by that state Linking Words
its
an agreement that will Replace the word
it's
it is
definately
help in Correct your spelling
definitely
reduce
and limiting Wrong verb form
reducing
traficc
. In conclusion, Correct your spelling
traffic
traffics
can be limited in a way but sadly it will be a controversial way but if we gave the workers the benefit Correct subject-verb agreement
traffic
for
coming early to work and organizing the Change preposition
of
roads
and adding new shortcuts Use synonyms
this
will be an easy achievement to be done in any region.Linking Words
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accuracy
Be careful with spelling errors such as 'civillians', 'traffics', and 'dilema'. Such mistakes can sometimes distract readers.
structure
Consider structuring your essay into clearer paragraphs for better readability. Each paragraph should ideally have one main idea.
supporting details
More detailed examples and explanations could strengthen your main points. For instance, expand on how redesigning roads would work in other cities.
task response
Your essay introduces a clear position on the topic, and you make an effort to support your main ideas with examples.
structure
You've successfully included both an introduction and a conclusion, providing a framework for your argument.
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion