The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the US from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparions where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the US from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparions where relevant.
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The line graph presented illustrates the proportion of
households
in the U.S. that owned a washing machine, computer, phone, internet connection, and
DVD
player from 1995 to 1999.
Overall
, all of the technologies, with the exception of the
DVD
player, showed an upward trend throughout the four-year period.
Conversely
, the percentage of
households
with a
DVD
player
initially
declined before experiencing an increase over the years. The ownership of washing machines and computers began at 40% and 60%, respectively, and steadily grew, finishing at 80% and 70% by 1999. In a similar vein, internet access started with one in ten
households
in 1995 before consistently rising to 30% in 1998.
This
figure
then
surged significantly to reach 50% of
households
in 1999. In 1995, just under 20% of
households
owned a phone.
This
percentage gradually increased to around 45% by 1998, peaking at approximately 75% of
households
in 1999.
DVD
players were owned by about 25% of homes in 1995. After a drop to less than 20% in 1996, ownership rose considerably to 40% of residents by 1999.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, dvd with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • adoption rates
  • technological proliferation
  • year-on-year growth
  • digital divide
  • saturation point
  • laggard technology
  • consumer electronics
  • technological obsolescence
  • internet penetration
  • market dynamics
  • socioeconomic factors
  • innovation trajectory
  • connectivity infrastructure
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