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Globalization in languages is increasing rapidly. Some individuals believe children should learn a

second

tongue

in the early stage of life. I think the advantages are far higher than the disadvantages. Youngsters can learn the other

language

easily and it will help them in the future in many aspects. These are the pros.

However

, juveniles will forget their own

language

. I will discuss the matter in forthcoming paragraphs. There are some benefits,

firstly

, in childhood children are like plain paper if they learn a

second

language

at that stage, they can do it easily as compared to

learn

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the

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mature age.

For example

, toddlers are in the first stage of learning, at

the

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early age in Life. They do not know everything. So when they start to learn another

tongue

, they will

success

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as they are just beginners.

As a result

, toddlers adopt things very fast and smoothly.

Secondly

, learners learn another

language

in their childhood,

then

in future whenever they migrate to another city or country, they will feel confident as they not only can speak but understand things and make new friends

also

. The main drawback is that most youngsters

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when they learn a

second

tongue

, move forward to complete their goals.

Then

sometimes they have to migrate to other places.

Furthermore

, when children adopt other languages, they become habitual to speak

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and gradually they start to forget their own

language

. To exemplify, 75% of people migrate to other places and they know the

language

that other places

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use,

then

they

also

use to speak their

tongue

and by passing time they lose their own

language

skills.

Hence

globalization in the

language

is increasing as people adopt other tongues.

To sum up

although

there are a lot of pros to learning a

second

language

, people feel free when they arrive any other place and they learn it easily. The main con

that

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equalization in languages cannot be neglected as it demolishes the uniqueness of tongues.

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To improve task response, ensure that your essay directly addresses all aspects of the question. Be sure to thoroughly discuss both the advantages and disadvantages with more specific examples and explanations.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use more linking words and phrases to improve flow between and within paragraphs, enhancing coherence and cohesion.

supported main points

Support your main points with more detailed and varied examples to effectively illustrate your arguments and make your essay more persuasive.

introduction conclusion present

Your introduction clearly states your position and gives a good overview of the main points you'll discuss, providing a solid start to the essay.

logical structure

The essay maintains a clear structure, with separate paragraphs for advantages and disadvantages, which helps in delivering your ideas effectively.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

for example
for instance
to illustrate this
to give a clear example
such as
namely
to illustrate
take, for example

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

330 words

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