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Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining. What do you think are the main reasons for long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer in such situations?

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There is no denying the fact that a couple's
life
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 took various forms.
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 it is a commonly held belief that some individuals
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 to live away from their
partner
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, there is
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 an argument that long-distance relationships
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 plenty of difficulties and training.
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 essay will analyze
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 the main factors for long-distance relationships, and how to assist couples in dealing with that situation.
To begin
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 with, living in a long-distance relationship means that you live in a different city or
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country from your
partner
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. In some situations, couples will be separated for several years. The main
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 of
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 trend is that
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 some males
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 obligated to travel to another country to work and build a career.
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, moving to college to study or teach is one of the main reasons.
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, if a husband
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 a teaching opportunity in a distinct city that must start next week, his wife will have to wait until the end of the semester before seeing him again. In terms of the current solutions, couples can utilize social media to be close to each other. It is
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 possible to say that, they must program their work schedule to have a chance to meet during holidays.
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, deep communication is a must to fill that void and enhance their relationship.
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, speaking with your
partner
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 about your feelings will make them feel involved in your
life
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. In conclusion, there are no easy answers to
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 question. On balance,
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, despite people having different points of view, I tend to believe that
life
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 circumstances will always change and bonding with your
partner
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 no matter what is going on will facilitate your
life
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.

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clarity
Clarify some statements for better comprehension. For instance, phrases like 'training' in the introduction could be clarified to enhance understanding of the difficulties faced in long-distance relationships.
development
Include a more detailed explanation or specific example concerning the role of technology in maintaining long-distance relationships to provide depth.
structure
The essay has a concise introduction and conclusion, effectively framing the discussion on long-distance relationships.
organization
Main points are presented logically and the essay is well-organized.
examples
The use of specific examples, such as the teaching opportunity scenario, provides relevance and grounding to the argument.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • long distance relationship
  • strain
  • relocation
  • educational pursuits
  • military service
  • family obligations
  • economic factors
  • digital communication
  • global opportunities
  • residence
  • citizenship
  • separation
  • career opportunities
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