The graph below shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK (expressed in percentage terms). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph provides a
comparsion
of access to four different types of modern technology in British Correct your spelling
comparison
papolution
over a Correct your spelling
population
period
of 7 years.
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Overall
, it is clear all devices recorded increases over the entire Linking Words
period
, with CD player Use synonyms
was
the Correct your spelling
as
primarly
main in UK families. Internet access Correct your spelling
primary
primarily
introduced
in the year of 1998.
On the one hand, in the year Add a missing verb
was introduced
of
1996 Change preposition
apply
home
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the home
combuter
and CD playerCorrect your spelling
computer
was
the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
primarly
two serves people Correct your spelling
primary
primarily
use
them with 35 and 60 per cent, Wrong verb form
used
recpectively
, Correct your spelling
respectively
then
both had Linking Words
an
Change the article
a
steadily
increase until the end of the Change the word
steady
period
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by
recording 60 per cent for home Change preposition
apply
combuter
and 80 per cent for DC player.
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computer
On the other hand
, mobile phones had a Linking Words
significat
increase, starting woth19% in the year Correct your spelling
significant
of
1996 and in the next two years Change preposition
apply
recorded
22%, Wrong verb form
recording
then
had a Linking Words
jumb
to 42 in the middle of the Correct your spelling
jump
period
, Use synonyms
then
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continue
its rise to 70 in 2003. Wrong verb form
continued
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While
people Correct word choice
When
has
started Unnecessary verb
apply
use
internet access in 1998 Change the form of the verb
using
then
increased Linking Words
till
43% of people who Change preposition
to
use
the internet Wrong verb form
used
in
the end of the Change the preposition
at
period
.Use synonyms
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