The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows a comprehensive overview of the production trend of three primary fuel sources in
UK
over a Correct article usage
the UK
19 year
period. The unit of measurement used in energy is millions of Add a hyphen
19-year
tonnes
.
Overall
, natural gas shows a substantial rise over the period. While
the other two, petroleum and coal, show fluctuating movement
throughout the years.
Fix the agreement mistake
movements
To begin
with, natural gas started around
40 Change preposition
at around
million
tonnes
and slowly increased to above 40 million
in 1981 until it reached peaking
up to 100 Replace the word
peak
million
tonnes
in 2000. In contrast
, coal production showed a downward trend, initially
to 80 units in 1981, and then
rebounding
greatly, it Wrong verb form
rebounded
dips
to 40 Wrong verb form
dipped
million
tonnes
, then
went up slightly to 60 million
from 1986 to 1991 and it plateaud
until it Correct your spelling
plateaued
plateaus
plateau
experiences
continuous drop throughout the year.
For petroleum, starts at around 90 Wrong verb form
experienced
million
metric tonnes
and rises until
140 units in 1986, Change preposition
to
decline
to 100 Correct subject-verb agreement
declines
million
tonnes
in 1991 and climb
up again for the subsequent year until 2000 reaching its highest consumption at approximately 150 Correct subject-verb agreement
climbs
millions
Change to singular
million
tonnes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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