The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows a comprehensive overview of the production trend of three primary fuel sources in
UK
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the UK
show examples
over a
19 year
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19-year
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period. The unit of measurement used in energy is millions of
tonnes
.
Overall
, natural gas shows a substantial rise over the period.
While
the other two, petroleum and coal, show fluctuating
movement
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movements
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throughout the years.
To begin
with, natural gas started
around
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at around
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40
million
tonnes
and slowly increased to above 40
million
in 1981 until it reached
peaking
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peak
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up to 100
million
tonnes
in 2000.
In contrast
, coal production showed a downward trend,
initially
to 80 units in 1981, and
then
rebounding
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rebounded
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greatly, it
dips
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dipped
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to 40
million
tonnes
,
then
went up slightly to 60
million
from 1986 to 1991 and it
plateaud
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plateaued
plateaus
plateau
until it
experiences
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experienced
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continuous drop throughout the year. For petroleum, starts at around 90
million
metric
tonnes
and rises
until
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to
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140 units in 1986,
decline
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declines
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to 100
million
tonnes
in 1991 and
climb
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climbs
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up again for the subsequent year until 2000 reaching its highest consumption at approximately 150
millions
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million
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tonnes
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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