They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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The awareness of green living

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as recycling is becoming a lifestyle, but only for some

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. There are more individuals who never do those practices because they are not

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effort, some

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argue that governments should make laws on recycling. I would like to agree

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important reasons.

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people

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need direct incentives in order to encourage them to do something. A

law

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that provides proportional rewards and punishments for environment-friendly actions is an effective way to push

people

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to act. We

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count on

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good willing

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to maintain our

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safety

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since they have a lot of other duties in their

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lives

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, even though recycling will cost a lot for a company,

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apply

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a tax incentive will motivate them to do it.

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government

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the government

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could make a

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that

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of rewards

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as tax incentives for companies.

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, a

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will set a standard for the communities to enhance

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especially since

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recycling

is a new thing. Not many

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have a comprehensive understanding

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how to do it.

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, in my office, even though management has separated trash

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into two categories

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plastic and food,

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still throw their plastic

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containers

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. In summary,

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law

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is needed in order to boost

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recycling efforts.

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need direct incentives that could be provided by

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law

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function as

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educative

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making

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people

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have more understanding.

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, I argue that

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law

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is an important

tools

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to make

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recycling

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more. After the recycling

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published

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important to socialize it to the

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relevant specific examples

Consider providing more specific examples to support your points. Real-world statistics or case studies about successful government recycling programs could strengthen your arguments.

complete response

Clarify and expand on your introduction. Briefly highlight what each of your main points will discuss to set clearer expectations.

introduction conclusion present

The introduction and conclusion are present, helping to frame your argument effectively.

logical structure

Your essay maintains a logical flow and structure, making it easy for the reader to follow your argument.

supported main points

Each of your main points is supported and related back to your central argument about the importance of legal requirements.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

284 words

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Many people think it is the government’s responsibility to ensure the provision of good health care for everyone in the community and that each individual should be cared for by State medical programmes. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?