The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The two pie charts illustrate the
reasons
why individuals travel to
work
by two different transportation ( bicycle and car ).
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the
reasons
why a group of people preferred to choose cycling to
work
. The most significant
reasons
to travel by bicycle were health and fitness and less pollution. In comparison, the most common reason why they drive a car to
work
is more comfort . To commence with
reasons
why people use cycling to travel to
work
. Interestingly, both health and fitness and less pollution were the largest segments accounting for 30% .
While
no costs were the least significant at 15% .
Additionally
, no parking problems had a slight growth of 15%. Eventually , faster than driving was the lowest part of the chart 12% respectively.
Secondly
, pretty obvious that the comfort reason made up the biggest part of the chart 40% . Need to carry things to
work
and faster than cycling both had the same significance with a percentage of 14% .
Furthermore
, safer than cycling made up the smallest part of the chart.
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