The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate changes in the layout of the
city
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from 2000 until today. In general, there have been significant changes, with several additions to the
city
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, some rearrangements and even removals. In 2000 the
city
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had a main road for vehicles just below the
city
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centre
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. Above
it
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it,
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there was a university with
the
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an
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old train station and some trees next to it.
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, there was an old market on the left side of the
city
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centre
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and the port was empty.
However
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, today the
city
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centre
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has a bike rental scheme with a tramline to it with a new covered market and a new shop next to it. The main road has been replaced with a path for pedestrians only.
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, several additions were introduced to the port,
such
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as a restaurant, bars and clubs. Even though, the university remained unchanged the train station was renewed and relocated just below it and a new shopping
centre
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located on the top right with a new hall of residence on the left.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore".
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • land use
  • residential
  • commercial
  • green spaces
  • public transport
  • urbanization
  • de-urbanization
  • facilities
  • amenities
  • industrial
  • transformation
  • recent times
  • comparisons
  • notable
  • key features
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