The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate changes in the layout of the

city

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from 2000 until today. In general, there have been significant changes, with several additions to the

city

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, some rearrangements and even removals. In 2000 the

city

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had a main road for vehicles just below the

city

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centre

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. Above

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it,

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there was a university with

the

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old train station and some trees next to it.

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, there was an old market on the left side of the

city

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centre

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and the port was empty.

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, today the

city

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centre

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has a bike rental scheme with a tramline to it with a new covered market and a new shop next to it. The main road has been replaced with a path for pedestrians only.

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, several additions were introduced to the port,

such

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as a restaurant, bars and clubs. Even though, the university remained unchanged the train station was renewed and relocated just below it and a new shopping

centre

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located on the top right with a new hall of residence on the left.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, centre with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructure
land use
residential
commercial
green spaces
public transport
urbanization
de-urbanization
facilities
amenities
industrial
transformation
recent times
comparisons
notable
key features

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