The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry
The given
process
by which Use synonyms
bricks
are made for the building industry.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the procedure consists of seven stages, commencing with digging up the Linking Words
clay
and culminating in delivery.
In the first stage, the Use synonyms
clay
is dug up from the ground by a giant digger. After being dug, the Use synonyms
clay
is placed onto a metal grid, Use synonyms
that is
used to break it into small pieces. The roller helps Linking Words
this
Linking Words
process
. Use synonyms
Following
Linking Words
this
step, the water and sand are added to the Linking Words
clay
, and Use synonyms
this
blend is either placed into a mould or Linking Words
is
cut off by a wire cutter.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Next,
these Linking Words
bricks
are dried in the drying oven for 24-48 hours. In the subsequent stage, the Use synonyms
bricks
have tried a heating and cooling Use synonyms
process
. They are heated in a kiln at moderate and high temperatures, and later a cooling Use synonyms
process
in a chamber for 48-72 hours. Before getting to the final stage, the Use synonyms
bricks
are packed and delivered by a delivery truck.Use synonyms
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