The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates
team
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scores over the period from 2002 to 2005 of three different groups A,
B
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, and C.
While
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the horizontal axis shows the season of each, the vertical one defines the amount of
points
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that every
team
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gained.
According to
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4-year results, it is evident that
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B
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is always placed higher than others, and
while
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the highest score
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it
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was in 2002 equal to 82
points
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, the lowest was in 2004, even 43
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, when
team
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A earned more than usual, 35 marks, yet still lower than crew
B
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. It is
also
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shown, that
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B
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experienced a continuous decrease in the period from 2002 to 2004, and right after the slight fall, it returned to its previous position, with a result of 55
points
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. First two years we can see that
team
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C was placed higher than
team
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A, owing to its marks.
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, in 2002 Their results were double
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A score,
however
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, after the rapid rise of Crew
B
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in 2004, they were not able to beat them. In conclusion, over four years every
team
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had its own rises, falls and developments,
nevertheless
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, group
B
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was not bitten, even once.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words team, b, points with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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