The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
amount
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of daily requirement for
electricity
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during two different seasons, namely winter and summer,
while
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the pie chart depicts the proportion of
electricity
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used for different purposes.
Overall
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, there is an obvious non-correlation between how much it is used and for what. The
electricity
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is used in winter more than the
amount
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of demand in summer.
In addition
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, it is used a lot for heating houses and water,
while
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it is used less for some technologies than that. In winter, we can see that the
electricity
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is requested between 30 and 40 thousand
units
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at approximately 2 or 3 am,
then
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it slightly goes down before it dramatically increases to about 50000
units
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between 9 and 12 pm.
On the other hand
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, the statistics change in summer, the line starts at about 17000
units
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when the day starts, after
that
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it goes on stable before climbing to 20000
units
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in the afternoon. It again reaches the highest
usage
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amount
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after downing and going stable. The
electricity
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which is used for heating rooms and water takes the biggest
usage
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by 52.5 per cent,
while
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the
electricity
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usage
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of both lighting TV and radio, and vacuum cleaners, food mixers and
such
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electric
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electrical
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tools take the minor part by 15 per cent. Meanwhile, the
amount
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of
usage
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for ovens, kettles and washing machines is 17.5 per cent in the given chart.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, electricity, units, usage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity consumption
  • Kilowatt-hours (kWh)
  • Energy demand
  • Power grid
  • Renewable energy sources
  • Non-renewable energy sources
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Conservation efforts
  • Industrial sector
  • Residential sector
  • Commercial sector
  • Fluctuation
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Efficiency improvements
  • Seasonal variation
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