You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • explain why you wouid like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I have recently
came
across an advertisement in an Australian magazine and found out that you are looking for someone after six Change the verb form
come
yearold
Correct your spelling
year old
year-old
child
Change to a plural noun
children
while
also
live
with a family.
After giving Wrong verb form
living
this
idea a thought, I may be a right fit for this
opportunity. Australia is a place which I always dream
about and wanted to visit. It has rich ecosystems I want to learn about, beautiful architecture, museums, Wrong verb form
dreamed
culinary
and much more. Replace the word
cuisine
This
job would be a first step to my dream even though I understand the fact about
being 100% committed to the job.
It is not an easy task to find a suitable person Change preposition
of
nowaday
I understand how difficult it might be to let a stranger inside Correct your spelling
nowadays
family
. My personal background will make you feel safe. I am myself coming from a big family with many kids. The were times when I had to spend Add an article
the family
a family
week
alone with my siblings and as Add an article
a week
the week
a
Change the article
an
adult
their Add a comma
adult,
life
and safety were in my Fix the agreement mistake
lives
hand
. Fix the agreement mistake
hands
More over
I have experience in looking after children and would be more than welcome to give you professional references in Correct your spelling
Moreover
this
regard. Kids love me and they seem to find and build meaningful relationships with them. Kids love me and listen to me, especially when it comes to completing tasks they don't find exiting
and boring. During the time I look after or babysit children we focus on interpersonal development and difficult games help develop brain and interpersonal skills. So don't worry your child is going to be in safe hands.
During my free time if it happens to be I would focus on exploring nature and attractions like museums, parks and restaurants. Possibly I would take fishing or surfing courses.
Looking forward to Correct your spelling
exciting
hear
Change the verb form
hearing
beak
from you.
Faithfully yours,
Sofiia LyefiCorrect your spelling
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coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a single main idea to improve coherence.
task response
Proofread the letter for minor grammatical errors and typos to enhance task response.
task response
The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task, providing reasons for interest in the job, detailing suitability, and mentioning how free time will be spent.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately formal for the context.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.