The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about the proportion of renewable energy in total energy in four different countries,
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as Australia, Sweden, Iceland, and Turkey from 1997 to 2010.
Overall
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, there were fluctuating numbers of renewable power between the four different countries.
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, the total experienced upward in Iceland and Sweden.
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, Iceland had the highest percentage, it started from about 45% in 1997,
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increased to 60% in 2000, and continued towards 70% in 2010.
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Sweden
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had an increasing trend, and the count was the smallest compared to the others.
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, Turkey tends to fluctuate in small amounts, it had nearly 40% in 1997,
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increased to 40% in 2000, but decreased to almost 30% in 2010.
On the other hand
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, the total of green energy in Australia experienced downward from 1997 until 2010. The amount of renewable power in Australia was under 10% in 1997, and always decreased to almost 5% in 2010.
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