The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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in 2010, 2011 and 2012. It can be seen the proportion of British
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, the international pupils had steady progress over time, respectively.
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students
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