A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -request advise about a gift for his/her family -ask about activities and clothing in his/her country -find out about the food

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Dear
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, hope
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am very happy that you have invited me to your country and it is a good chance for me to explore a new culture. among all these,
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am writing
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letter to get some information before leaving. As you know,
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belong to a Sikh family so I am not aware of your Christian culture like what kind of gifts are received.so
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want you to give me quick advice on it.
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have heard the USA is a cold country special in winter so
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want to know what kind of clothes
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should carry with me and
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am
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excited to know about the activities we are going to do there. I am lucky that
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am getting a chance to experience a new exposure.
Besides
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want to know about the food culture. As you know I am a pure vegetarian so it is really important for me to get information about the food variety. see you soon yours truly Simran
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logical structure
Enhance logical flow by organizing points into separate, clear paragraphs. For instance, separate paragraphs could discuss gifts, clothing and activities, and food.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure paragraphs focus on a single topic to improve clarity and understanding.
complete response
Ensure all tasks are addressed with more detailed explanations. Expand on your requests and provide more context or questions to enhance the level of detail.
suitable writing tone
The tone is friendly and suits a letter to a friend, which matches the task's requirements well.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are clear, with appropriate language for a letter to a friend.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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