The diagram below shows the life cycle of salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. af

The diagrams illustrate the life cycle of a species of large fish called

salmon

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. In general, there are three

phase

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phases

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of the life cycle of

salmon

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.

First,

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the little

salmon

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called fry with

the

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a

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length of 3-8 cm

is

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was

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fast flowing across the lower river for approximately 4 years before it turned

to

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into

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a smolt with

the

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a

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length

around

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of around

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12-15 cm.

Second,

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the smolt

then

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will continue to swim until

reached

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reaches

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the open sea or the ocean for about 5 years.

Lastly

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, the smolt will

turned

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turn

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into an

adult

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salmon

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. The length of the

adult

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salmon

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will reach over 70-76 cm. The

adult

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salmon

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then

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will

moving

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move

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slowly to the upper rivers for

abour

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about

5-6 months to

looking

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look

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for

a reeds

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reeds

a reed

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.

Then

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, the

adult

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salmon

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will produce the egg in the bottom of the reeds that

covered

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are covered

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with stones,

that

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which

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later will

turned

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turn

be turned

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into a fry.