The map illustrates the changes in Stockford City in 1986 and present time. Summarize the key points and make comparison. Wite the essay in 150 words.
The map shows how Stockford changed in 80 years.
Overall
, the city is maintained across the river Stocke on the left; where, nowadays, the areas dedicated to farm animals have been substituted by homes.
Back in 1930, there was clear evidence that farming was the main activity in the town because most of the surface was used for cows. While
on the left side of the main road, there were found some houses and in between, shops and the post office; oppositely, on the right, there were more homes, the primary school and just under there was a large house with gardens. Meanwhile, in 2010, the organization of the city was modified to be more accessible. Furthermore
, secondary roads were added to the main one, creating urban zones.The primary school was maintained but the large house was turned into a retirement home, the garden is now smaller because some houses were built in the old entrance. Moreover
, in front of it, there has been constructed a place like a square, surrounded by houses.
To summarize, Stockford was modernized leaving back the times when animals were all over the city; creating a perfect environment for families.Submitted by lusitusi:)
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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