The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for

different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting

and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
of international visitors who
traveled
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travelled
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to the
UK
for
holiday
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holidays
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, business
,
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apply
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and
visit
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visits
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to friends or relatives
from
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between
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1989 and 2009.
Overall
, the
number
of overseas tourists to the
UK
for all given purposes increased in 2009. The holiday purpose had the wildest fluctuations over the period. Notably, the amount of tourism for visiting
to
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apply
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friends or relatives had the lowest
number
.
To begin
with, the
number
of people who visited the
UK
for a holiday had the highest fluctuations, with a massive jump from over 6
million
in 1989 to slightly below 10
million
in 1999, declining to below 8
million
in 2004, before increasing to above 8
million
in 2009.
However
, the
number
of visitors for business trips began the period with below 6
million
and it decreased to approximately 4
million
before 1994, ultimately
this
steadily escalated to approximately 6
million
after 2004. The
number
of
travelers
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travellers
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to the
UK
to visit a friend or relative started
with
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at
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below 4
million
and it steadily rose to above 6
million
in 2004. Despite
this
increase, it remained the lowest purpose.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, uk, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • trend
  • fluctuations
  • statistics
  • year-on-year comparison
  • peak periods
  • holidaymakers
  • business trips
  • educational tourism
  • significant increase/decrease
  • data interpretation
  • exponential growth
  • steady decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cultural events
  • tourist influx
  • graph analysis
  • quantitative change
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