The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of international visitors who traveled
to the Change the spelling
travelled
UK
for holiday
, businessFix the agreement mistake
holidays
,
and Remove the comma
apply
visit
to friends or relatives Correct subject-verb agreement
visits
from
1989 and 2009.
Change preposition
between
Overall
, the number
of overseas tourists to the UK
for all given purposes increased in 2009. The holiday purpose had the wildest fluctuations over the period. Notably, the amount of tourism for visiting to
friends or relatives had the lowest Remove the preposition
apply
number
.
To begin
with, the number
of people who visited the UK
for a holiday had the highest fluctuations, with a massive jump from over 6 million
in 1989 to slightly below 10 million
in 1999, declining to below 8 million
in 2004, before increasing to above 8 million
in 2009. However
, the number
of visitors for business trips began the period with below 6 million
and it decreased to approximately 4 million
before 1994, ultimately this
steadily escalated to approximately 6 million
after 2004.
The number
of travelers
to the Change the spelling
travellers
UK
to visit a friend or relative started with
below 4 Change preposition
at
million
and it steadily rose to above 6 million
in 2004. Despite this
increase, it remained the lowest purpose.Submitted by zuhrakhirie1997 on
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