During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter, remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..................,
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter on behalf of our conversation during the plane journey as we had talked that you owned multinational companies and offered me a cashier placement at your place. Firstly
, I would really appreciate you considered me as a good worker for your company.
In our conversation, you mentioned different placements and I have been seeking a cashier job for the last
3 months. I have been thinking about your offer since last
week and discussed it with my parents as expected they allowed me, as I have doing a cashier job since I was 18 and it is almost 6 years now and I am well in communication, managing accounts, check proper cash flow, good leadership qualities. I have been awarded with good customer care service last
year.
Please let me know if you think I am suitable for this
placement and do not hesitate to request my work experience or resume. I would really appreciate it if you could send me the requirement
list for Fix the agreement mistake
requirements
this
job.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
yours faithfully,
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Logical Structure
Try to smoothen the transition between when you first met and the specific job interests. This would enhance logical progression.
Single Idea Per Paragraph
Ensure to distinguish new ideas or points by starting a new paragraph.
Coherence and Cohesion
Each paragraph effectively contributes to the task response and logical structure of the letter.
Writing Tone
The letter maintains a polite and professional tone throughout, suitable for the formal nature of the communication.
Logical Structure
The letter is structured logically with an introduction, main content about the job interest, and a conclusion with a call-to-action.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite