The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. summeruse the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevent.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 

summeruse the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevent.
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The bar chart illustrates the frequency of eating at fast
food
restaurants among Americans from 2003 to 2013.
Overall
, the trends indicate that
majority
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the majority
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of people visited fast
food
restaurant
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restaurants
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either “Once a week” or “Once or twice a month” during the given period.
However
, there was a noticeable decline in weekly visits from 2006 to 2013, suggesting a shift towards less frequent consumption over time. In 2003, just above 30%
people
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of people
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ate fast
food
joint "once a week", which increased slightly to around 32.5% in 2006, making it the peak year for
this
category
.
However
, by 2013, the proportion had declined to approximately 27%.
Conversely
, the "Once or twice a month"
category
experienced a rise in popularity over the decade. Starting at approximately 25% in 2003, it increased slightly to 30% in 2013, surpassing the "Once a week"
category
by the end of the period.
This
shift indicates a growing preference for less frequent fast
food
visits. The "
Every day
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"
category
consistently remained the least popular, with fewer than 5% of Americans eating at fast
food
restaurants daily throughout the period. Meanwhile, the proportion of people who visited "A few times a year" or "Never" gradually increased, particularly in 2013, suggesting a small but noticeable movement away from fast
food
consumption altogether.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, category with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "indicate" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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