The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make cımoarisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph provides information about the
number
of participants
for five activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020.
Overall
, the biggest change was experienced by table tennis while
film club and martial arts remained stable over the period. Amateur dramatics activity saw a downward trend in contrast
to musical performances.
The number
of participants
in the film club began at over 60 while
martial arts started at around 35 people
. Both activity
remain stable throughout the period around 65 Change to a plural noun
activities
people
and about 35 people
, respectively. On the other hand
, the Initial figure of musical performance participants
showed zero people
until 2005. From 2005 to 2020, musical performance increased steadily by around 19 participants
.
The number
of participants
on table tennis and amateur dramatics experienced a similar rise trend between 2000 and 2005. In 2010, both activities had the same participants
at around 20. From 2010 to 2020, the number
of participants
in table tennis grew significantly from around 20 to about 50 whereas
the population of amateur dramatics activity decreased considerably from around 20 to about 5.Submitted by yito18750 on
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