Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the word artificial intelligence is in trend commonly known as AI. It prefers to a
software
designed by humans. once
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AI
software
is developed , It can answer various questions and can do various tasks using its algorithm set by humans. Many people think that development in the AI sector could be very beneficial. I will elaborate on it in
further
paragraphs and give my opinion on
this
topic.
To begin
with, artificial intelligence was first introduced by Sir John Edward in 1990. It was first used in a calculator to calculate complex calculations. from that time period, It has developed a lot.
For instance
, one can make a short animation movie using AI on just a mobile by providing specific information. It has reduced a lot of work and pressure on people especially in
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field as much of the work is done using AI.
Furthermore
, there are many things which can be done by AI, but
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of technology and advancement in
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sector, they are not possible as of now.
On the other hand
, there are
also
some
drawback
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of a
for example
, it can be corrupt or can be hacked as it is just
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software
.
furthermore
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a million or even
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scam can be done if a bank is using
ai
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software
for the transition of money by using just a computer.
Moreover
, if AI
software
is used in machines with
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, It can even prove to be a danger
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humanity. In conclusion,
According to
me development in AI would
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a positive impact on our
life
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lives
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and can help in the development of large upcoming
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projects
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as it
reduce
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the
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most of the work.
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task achievement
Try to elaborate more on the examples you provide. For instance, discuss specific benefits of AI with real-world applications.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that all paragraphs connect logically to each other. Transitions linking different sections could be clearer.
coherence cohesion
The introduction clearly sets up the discussion about AI by providing context and stating your opinion.
task achievement
You have fairly captured both sides of the argument by identifying potential benefits and drawbacks of AI, which demonstrates a balanced understanding of the topic.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • efficiency
  • innovations
  • quality of life
  • personalized education
  • complex problems
  • data processing
  • economic growth
  • public safety
  • surveillance
  • predictive analytics
  • job displacement
  • ethical implications
  • malicious purposes
  • cyber-attacks
  • invasion of privacy
  • regulations
  • ethical guidelines
  • responsible development
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