The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced.

The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced.
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The diagram explains the way in which leather goods are manufactured to produce
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of leather items.
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it is clear that
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the process consists of 11 stages, beginning with drying the
skin
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and ending up with making varied goods. Animal
skin
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has to go through a number of processes before goods can be manufactured. In the first stage, the
skin
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is dried and
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loaded in trucks to be dispatched to a factory. After that, water and lime are added to wash it before it is soaked with lime in the fifth stage.
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the flattering machine flatters with two rollers. Yet, in the next step, having been flattered, the
skin
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is immersed in tannin (water + vegetable matter).
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In the
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above steps, animal
skin
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is polished to be filled up into a truck. Once loaded, ready
skin
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is delivered to another factory, where various leather items, ranging from shoes to bags are made.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words skin with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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