The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.

The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.
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The graph gives information about the proportion of eaten spreads in different years.
Overall
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, the spread consumption fluctuated in every three categories.
Also
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, the number of eaten butter saw a large drop
while
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low fat and reduced spreads amount get higher. Compared with other products butter’s stats were much higher than other pastes, in 1981 its consumption started with nearly 140
grams
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However
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it saw a dramatic decrease in 1996, the numbers changed to 70
grams
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Also
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, in 2007 it declined slightly, 50
grams
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. Margarine spread usage fluctuated mostly than other types of spread. In 1981 it was eaten nearly 90
grams
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per year and in 1986 it saw a slight drop to 80
grams
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. In both 1991 and 1996, its consumption stayed completely the same at 100
grams
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Finally
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, in 2007 it got noticeably less, 40
grams
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. Consuming Low fat and reduced spreads first started only in 1996 with merely 10
grams
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, during next years it’s amount number saw a great growth. In 2001 it rose to more than 80
grams
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and in 2007 there was a small decline,70
grams
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Vocabulary: Replace the words grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • spreads
  • increased
  • decreased
  • stable
  • significantly
  • approximately
  • per capita
  • remarkable
  • peaked
  • experienced
  • started
  • remained
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