The diagram below shows the bread making process

The diagram below shows the bread making process
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the bread making process
The diagram provides data on the process of making
bread
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
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bread making
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bread-making
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process consists of five distinct stages in
this
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linear process, beginning with adding various necessary ingredients
as well as
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ending with making two types of
bread
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Bread
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has to go through a number of processes before it can be manufactured. In the
fisrt
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first
step, four different products, ranging from sugar and milk to egg and wheat are put into
bowl
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a bowl
the bowl
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, before mixed until a uniform combination is achieved. After that, it is stirred with the help of
food
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a food
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processor. Having been blended,
dough
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the dough
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is kneaded to make
ready
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it ready
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for being
shoped
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shopped
shaped
shipped
.
Then
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,
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bread
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the bread
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is all ready after being put into two different ovens in order to take two types of shapes. Once the cooking stage is complete, the breads are packed for sale in supermarkets
as well as
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shops

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bread with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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