Many students today leave their home country and study abroad. Outline the advantages and disadvantages of doing this.
The world is very different today and that includes education. Many students go to another
country
to continue their studies.
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essay will outline the advantages and disadvantages of doing Linking Words
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.
There are many advantages Linking Words
about
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to studying
study
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out side
their Correct your spelling
outside
country
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Firstly
, Linking Words
study
outside Use synonyms
mother
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the mother
country
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learn
new skills . because can learn new language another your language Correct word choice
and learn
such
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us
English or chine language . Accept information about all over the world Correct your spelling
as
however
news about the far Linking Words
country
and can know a nice Use synonyms
please
of visit there Correct your spelling
place
country
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study
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secondly
, can make new friends other your Linking Words
country
to meeting and talk about yourself to learn new skills .They new Use synonyms
friend
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friends
it
is very important because change air in the Correct pronoun usage
apply
travel
to Correct your spelling
travelling
study
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Finally
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Finally,
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study
outside your Wrong verb form
studying
country
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it
is very good because some Correct pronoun usage
apply
countries
have special schools . Use synonyms
Such
as the UK have nice place Linking Words
school
that make people student Fix the agreement mistake
schools
fan
and some teachers have PhD and Fix the agreement mistake
fans
master
it is very good to learn Change noun form
master's
importance
information to be understand man .
Nowadays , Ther are some disadvantages to Replace the word
important
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study
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studying
out side
your Correct your spelling
outside
country
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Firstly
, Many people Linking Words
study
outside Use synonyms
countries
it is far Use synonyms
your
home and family .Change preposition
from your
Although
students have new problems about how can cooking Linking Words
a food
and wishing your clothes . Some Remove the article
food
a portion of food
student
feel miss Fix the agreement mistake
students
your
brother and only family . Correct pronoun usage
their
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secondly
Add a comma
secondly,
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study
outside your home in Wrong verb form
studying
far
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a far
country
some UK Use synonyms
it
is very expensive . Living in sim single room in Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
normal area it is Correct article usage
a
need
many between Wrong verb form
needs
stay
free in your home . Wrong verb form
staying
For
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example
the restaurant it is Add a comma
example,
need
mix many to Wrong verb form
needs
eat
fresh Verb problem
apply
food
Fix the agreement mistake
foods
such
as fish and beef . Linking Words
finally
, Linking Words
Some
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in Some
countries
it is common Use synonyms
steal
in Fix the infinitive
to steal
all the
area . letter Correct determiner usage
an
countries
in Use synonyms
over all
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overall
word
have strong police to Correct your spelling
world
product
students . people Correct your spelling
protect
steal
can kill and steal many Verb problem
apply
student
Change to a plural noun
students
because
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because of
unsave
Correct your spelling
unsafe
country
.
In conclusion, it is clear to see that studying abroad has many advantages. Use synonyms
However
, there are Linking Words
also
some disadvantages.Linking Words
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