In many countries, large amount of foods are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?

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a great
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food
waste in many countries around the world. in
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we will explore the
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reason
and solution to
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reduce
the
amount
of
food
waste. there are many
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reasons
for
this
problem.
first,
being a greedy person who
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purchased
purchase
too much
food
and always thinking of having more, ending up with too
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food
.
for instance
,
someone
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if someone
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feel
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hungery
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hungry
ordering from a regular
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restaurant
, they should know how much is enough from previous
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.
second,
neglecting the
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religion
religious
aspect, knowing that throwing
food
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a regular manner is
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forbidden
.
while
each person has to take it
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seriously
trying not to waste
food
daily. not caring and neglecting the
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religion
aspect
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certainly
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the
amount
of
food
wasting
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.
therefore
, there are many
solutions
to reduce the
amount
of
food
wasting
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. one of the
solutions
is raising the
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awareness
about the
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of not wasting
food
. raising
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awearness
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awareness
can be obtained on
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social media
platform
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platforms
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, TV and even
the
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restaurents
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restaurants
. restaurants can apply some fees on any
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leftover
food
encouraging people to order what they actually need.
other
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solutions
is freezing or sharing any
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leftover
leftovers
with others rather than
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it away.
lastly
, people should not
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be weakened
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by
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hunger feeling, try always to
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been enough in previous periods not depending on
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current feeling. to wrap up, the
amount
of
food
wastage is getting greater in many countries. knowing the
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reason
is half of the solution. we have stated the
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reasons
to be
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greediness
and weak
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religion
aspect.
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Therefore
, trying to overcome the hunger feeling,
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of moreover
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,
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and sahring
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sahring
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sharing
the leftovers with others are the best
solutions
for
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the problem in my opinion.
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